Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Week 4 Writing Assignment CEW



Oystercatcher A13, my usual birthday gift at Ameland, the Dutch island
 
It’s mid-November, and my hubby has all the plans in hands for this usual gift, that is a trip. We go every year to Ameland, – taking a ferry with the car to stay for a few days in one of the cozy and then almost empty hotels of this island, actually one of the most visited by tourists from all over the country. But we are not just the tourists; we have a great birding task, which is altogether part of the gift: to find the black-and-white bird, the Oystercatcher, that carries a very special individual plastic ring, among hundreds of similar ones. “My” Oystercatcher, that is the regular visitor to the Dutch island of Ameland in the non-breeding season, and that flies every year to breed at the White Sea, just above the Polar Circle, in the north-west of Russia. To fly the distance of about 3000 kilometers, the birds need only a few days with good weather and proper wind condition; and they fly it each year, most successful survivors reaching the age of 30 years or more, coming late in spring to the breeding islands, and flying back to the Wadden Sea as early as in August. Getting prepared to this November trip I remember every chance I had to see that particular bird. I ringed it myself in 2002 – and it was then already adult and breeding… It’s a long story to tell, not now in this abstract. 

It’s almost high tide, and hundreds and thousands of shorebirds gather to so called roosts, usually rather high places along the coastline where they can safely stay, - resting, sleeping, or preening, -  in dense often mixed species groups. From the dike, where we first drive by car, I observe the little cape, already familiar in all these years. The birds, staying along the waterline in compact flock, remain so far a bit restless. More and more new piping Oystercatchers arrive, joining the group,  managing to find a spot for themselves after one or two flaps of wings or quick negotiations with the neighbors. Sitting in the car, we can come much closer without any sign that we disturb the birds. Now I use the telescope, which is mounted on the car window, otherwise I cannot really read the rings on the still far away birds. Looking from the car window, I check every bird in the flock, trying to spot the rings. Sure, first I see those that are “not mine”.  Read the rings anyway – it is easy to find later who rings those in other places of the world. It is two hours since we’ve started. My hubby has screened all his newspapers, and patiently switched to the book. He is also a birder, but he has no patience for reading the color rings. And it is my birthday gift anyway! Yes, now I see it, my beloved shorebird! The yellow ring with black A13, – surprisingly still in a very good quality after so many years in use on this very Oystercatcher, - can not only be recognized, but even photographed!   The bird survived another year, and another migration, so I am very happy indeed. 

P.S. Tried to describe the real story – regretfully in November 2012 we did not see it… Hope  my colleagues spot it now at the White Sea, in the nature reserve.

Actually, to add more -  here is the photo of this very bird, Oystercatcher A13 (photo taken by myself also on Ameland in November 2009):

 Enjoy it!

Friday, June 7, 2013

CEW: My Week 3 assignment and related question on peer review

The course is progressing well, really helpful to improve writing in English!
Decided to share my Week3 assignment - because I do not see myself the mistake, that one of the peers obviously spotted - that the verb tense is inconsistent somewhere. Re-read the below text few times - and cannot pot this inconsistency myself. Also regretfully nothing was written on this inconsistency in the comments. Could the forum visitors help? For all the other scores it is 100% of 100%, I am only looking where I was inconsistent in verb tenses.

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Local Street Product Market in the province of Groningen

This is Saturday, and we go with my hubby - as planned few days ago - to the local old estate, called Verhildersum, where the monthly street market of traditional and locally-made products takes place. It's still cold and windy, but the sun shines, adding finally to the feeling that long-awaited spring has come. After somewhat like 15 km drive we park the car, following the instructions given by volunteer youth traffic control, who help the market operate. It's crowded here! Well-known trio of violin-harmonica-guitar players inspires the visitors with somewhat old-style cheerful local music. We stroll along the stalls, looking around. Groups of people, some of them familiar, flock at the most prominent stands - one group enjoys tasting ciders, the other group discusses the flavours of local biologically made sausages and goat cheeses, some other people make their choice of bread and ready-made flour and grain mix. We wave our "hi, dear friend" to the cider stall boss - he lives in the same village as we do, only few houses apart, - and then join the other group with something that seems the most interesting to us: tasting the Wadden Sea local products. The edible gold of the Wadden! Smoked fish, - that was probably still swimming in the sea a week ago, - with slightly pickled herbs from the saltmarsh, first edible flowers from the local gardens, surprisingly tasty seeweed and a bit of natural sea salt. We take little crunchy toasts with every new thing, admire the delicate flavours and tastes, share perceptions, chat of some specifics of the recipies with the "chef" and her assistants, - and finally decide on the first things to buy. We always buy something here - not that it is always a must, but we so much like the atmosphere, and the market, and the local little businesses... It's fun and it's local tradition. We want to support it and be part of it. And it's great scene full of action!